"Take a NES and bash my head in with it"
Because this is so distinctively Retro gaming that it's shouting "HEY LOOK AT ME I'M OBSOLETE" I mean, this would be great if during the first half of the song it didn't sound like a white noise generator that's being faded in and out... I seem to remember.. Well anywho, the bass is a bit lacking, I think it needs to be a bit more hyperactive, which it IS in some areas, but in the areas where it's mellow and just sustaining one note, maybe that could be two alternating notes or something...
Well I really didn't think it was BAD at all, I just think it needs fixing.